Library of Formatting Examples:Thought Breaks/04A
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Walker, infinitely tired, forgot his coffee and began to tidy up the desk, filing everything he wanted to keep in an electronically locked cabinet, shoving everything else into the destruction of the vibrator. He pondered for a moment the powdered secrets that were heaped like black dust in the bottom of the canister: a symbol of safety to a terrified world. Step one: find Millet. <i>Find Millet.</i> <tb> It took the Secret Service exactly twenty-nine hours to locate Dr. Otto Millet. Thirty minutes later, Walker was climbing out of a government helicopter and staring at Millet's small house through squinted eyes which he shielded with both hands against the blazing desert sun. The house |
The white space means it's some kind of Break. This is from a Science Fiction magazine, a genre that used LOTS of Thought Breaks at the time, and Project Comments specified treating these as such. In other genres, it could be either a Section or a Thought Break.
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